Wednesday, May 14, 2008

My Stabs at Scifaiku

Aphelion has been gracious enough to publish my amateur haiku mutterings and encourage me to continue to explore this form. Here are three recent attempts for your enjoyment or critique...

Generation Gap (May 2008)

white hot, young sun boasts
super nova still on fire
and replies, eat my dust


Au Naturale (April 2008)

denuded satellites
race across earth's open fields
streakers celebrate


Proposal (March 2008)

first stop Saturn's rings
on to diamond-like stars
alien engagement

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Keep it clean and positive. (And sorry about the word verification, but the spmb*ts are out in full force!)