Tying up some dangling threads.
I promised I’d talk about wrapping things up in a
tidy manner. I don’t know about you, but when I read a story that has a lot of
unanswered questions, I’m not a happy camper. I even wonder about little things
like (here’s a fictional hypothetical example), “What happened to that lady who
showed up on page 50 with an important package and then just disappeared…I
thought she’d be making a reappearance to explain her role in the mystery.” (Or
something like that. You know what I’m saying.)
A writer’s rule, or at least as I’ve been taught, is
that almost all details are important to the story, and if the detail isn’t
important, then the writer shouldn’t draw attention to it. Yes, there are such
things as MacGuffins, but even MacGuffins serve a purpose and are an important
device to advance the plot.
In fact, I employ a MacGuffin in Secret Spice. For
those not familiar with the term, a MacGuffin is what keeps the plot moving
forward but ends up being sort of a red herring and not that important to the
actual resolution of the story.
It could be something like the Maltese Falcon.
Author Dashiell Hammett used a statuette of a falcon that is the centerpiece of
the chase, thus providing the motivating intrigue to his story made famous by
Alfred Hitchcock. It turns out the falcon isn't what everyone thought it was.
Now when my subconscious tells me to write something
into the story, I usually comply. It’s my creative brain working on the story,
and it knows a lot more about the story it’s telling than that critical voice
inside my head does. What I end up doing, however, is I’ll often jot those
strange little details downs so that I make sure I get them tidied up by the
One quick example from Secret Spice without giving
too much away. As I was finishing up the novel today (although I’m not completely
done, I’ll explain about that tomorrow), my mind went back to an odd scene that
my creative brain told me to write earlier in the book: someone had left a paperback
at Ma Tutt’s Donut Hut, a cozy mystery, in fact, and I had no idea who’d left
But in the final few scenes, the person who left the
book showed up at the Hut and claimed it. Who it was surprised even me, but it
added just the right touch, IMO, to this person’s character, giving (him or
her? no spoilers!) a new dimension to (his/her) personality hitherto unseen. Fun!
So after 2,100 words, I’ve basically concluded the story. Not happy with the exact ending, so tomorrow I’ll probably edit, add, think about, stress over, and eventually hit just the right note as to how it ends. I know how I think it should end, but I will sleep on it and let my subconscious confirm or alter what I have in mind. Yes, that’s my strategy!
Today’s Writing Tip…Let the creative brain (or your subconscious or whatever you want to call it) plant those seeds in your story, but be sure to water them and bring in the harvest by the story’s conclusion. (How’s that for a metaphor!)